Flash Game

Good people of OnRPG, I've decided to go into the flash "business". The reason for this post is I want to get some ideas and gather some critiques.

So, the story starts off with a hippie cow named Oist (heh, heh, heh) who's stash is stolen by aliens. This forces Oist to pursue the aliens in his VW Bus that has been converted into a spaceship that is fueled by rainbows.

This is just the base of the story. Obviously, it will progress as it goes along but I'd like some ideas, kudos, or critiques on the main story.

errrrr so u need background story for ur game or something?

To bad its a hippie..but I would say give him a red bandana and a cig. He should also have the power to summon a portal which would lead to the secret cow level.

lolol, you'd better hope you have enough talent, time, and ability to work quick with quality. Animation/programming in Flash is a huge time consumer, but it's a lot of fun too. I have a good number of years of experience with it, so feel free to ask me any questions on it.

As for your story, it's very abstract and doesn't sound very good at all to be honest, unless it's backed up by a witty and funny script.

Anyone can come up with these types of 'stories' from the age of 5.