Rate My Lyrics

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Originally Posted by Valcry

this is not a grammar thread D;<

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Just helpin' you out so you know for next time dood~

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Originally Posted by Valcry

haha,
ihave alot more i've written
i just wrote that in 10 minutes,
litteraly ;3



this is not a grammar thread D;<

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It's not a grammar thread but you post lyrics here... How are we supposed to understand your point if you don't use correct grammar?

So... where's the music?

We need a background to this,is it gonna be slow medium or fast paced?

it is best suited to be slow

i give it a 7

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Just take it to a lyrics forum or whatever those places are called.

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I give them a http://www.box.net/shared/0yl8e44k0s out of 10.

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I would also definitely give them a http://www.box.net/shared/4lom3yly8b out of 15.

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Did you make those?

Extremely...

http://www.ufoheadshop.com/wp-conten...oh_cheese1.jpg

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Originally Posted by hotyman

Did you make those?

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Maybe this will help clear up some of your confusion: http://www.box.net/shared/d53xnkh7hg

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Originally Posted by Raiyne

Extremely...http://www.box.net/shared/okuyikiild

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Yes, so quite extremely http://www.box.net/shared/okuyikiild indeed. I've never agreed more.

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Originally Posted by Suruxia

Guys don't be fooled by he! Hims! didn't wrote those lyrics, they're from a song by "The Best Boys" I looked them up on google and it came up with this song clip:

The Best Boys - How I'd Give It All (To You).mp3

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Oh wow, nice find. (lyrics are still horrible either way.)

Shame on you, Valcry.