http://i52.tinypic.com/34fi4rb.jpg
Should I add or remove something? :)
Doesn't seem good enough yet
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http://i52.tinypic.com/34fi4rb.jpg
Should I add or remove something? :)
Doesn't seem good enough yet
Blur some of the dots to the top-right a little bit to strengthen the motion effect.Quote:
Originally Posted by Geneishacking
The text is way to small and the backround could use some lighting.
/lovabro.
smooth the render towards the outer back edges to give it more dynamism, you could also fade the sharpen maybe 40%
possibly darken up the shadows in the background for better depth
otherwise it's good
-No Depth
-No flow
(imo)
http://i53.tinypic.com/fdd509.jpg
Darkened it more, added smoothness to some edges, blurred the right side a little:)