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Thats sweet, but its confusing and looks really messy to me at the first glance, i dont think black and white suits Jet Lee, some colour in it would be nice. Like leaving only certain places like Lee's shirt colour etc.
it took me a couple of secs to find the render. but besides that its great!
Its very nice, although quite messy, no focal point and no lighting. Good ammount of depth, which is because of the action packed stock you chose. Really nice work.
Deffinitly make it your current! I would just say light it up a bit and make the bottom text a little easier to read.
Decent. Not your best, Stop with the gradients:(