My project- NEED YOU GUYS!

THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH ANY KIND OR STYLE OF GAMING!

It's actually a personnal project which i started a few years ago and I'm still doing it. However it never went far as my mind keep swapping over the details.

I'm currently, more or less, a writter which I considered. However, I'm not really armed with a Godly grammar but I do believe I have a big vocabulary in mind. Anyway, let's get back on what kind of opinion I need you guys' to help me on.

- I'm tired of always stuck with the 1st chapters of my story thus, I want you guys to give me an opinion on how I should start the story.

(The 1st choice)
1- Start it as the young hero will start with a quiet, peaceful and quiet romantic life with his childhood friend which is who he's been loving..then one day, chaos broke free from their chain and rampaged the village. The reason behind the chaos was that the long life friend and crush of his was actually one of the last bloodline of a humanoid angels. ( Story does not involve around God nor does it have any appearance within it) As the berseker destroyed the village, it took it's leave and the boy started to chase after her. Then the story flows around that as a beginning.

(The 2nd Choice)
2 -Dream of a chaotic scenes 10 years ago. Where the hero named as Tenh witnessed the destruction of his village in the hands of a long known person of his age which he pretty much hated. He luckily survived that chaos along with his friend Sakura. He was then saved by a person which lead them into Zero, biggest city and metropolis of the warring world. EVentually, they joined an elite force known as Genesis and since then, they've been hunting " Yumi" to avenge their village. However as the story flows, Tenh found out that his memory...aren't really the facts that happened. He's been brain washed....

Sorry for any typos and grammar. Sorry.

So which start should I take? I would be also pelased to know some great ideas to complet my stories. I'll gladly take them if it pleased me. Also, I'm aiming for a complicate plot where it targets a rather older readers and not for 10 years old kids. Okok? Thanks for the help! Love you guys. ( Imma girl writter...soo.....)

You want us to decide the story for you? If you consider yourself a writer, then the story is in your hands, and having people pick the story for you gives you less freedom on what you want to write about.

Besides, the story-line suggestions you posted are extremely generic, if you want to evolve your writing skills, write about a bizarre story.

I knew someone would ask this kind of question. Here I'm just trying to know how the average readers wants.

1- A mysterious plot?
or
2- A normal starting with an expected stunt then a classic aventure.

The 2nd start I previously stated is nothing close to "normal" in my sens. As I simply summarize it. As lot's of thing is not mentionned.

I just want to know, which part is more attractive. The results here does not really mean the results of my project. I'm simply asking for opinions.

I wouldn't call myself an average reader in that sense, I probably read more than your average American.

Well my tastes in story-telling don't necessarily speak for the masses, but I prefer vivid story-telling, meaning extremely detailed scene introductions.

Oh, and I prefer number 1 on your list.

Use all 3, and some more that would make a good game

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Originally Posted by Negrac

Use all 3, and some more that would make a good game

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Did you read her (I'm inclined to think you are female) first post? This has nothing to do with a game, rather giving suggestions for stories and such.

I am good at those kind of things and had my i.q. test like a few times and ranked higher then most artists and righters in the artistic section. But what I would personally do and hope to do one day when I make my own mmo (going to school for it and everything, I really do want this to my future ocupation) would confuze the player with porn and "stupid humor". Then pull off the plot twist, then another plot twist, and keep making plot twists and drama. This being all centred around you being human and a lesser species, but you over come with your magic and war arts. Then through in medevil aspects like dracula and his vampires then vampire slayers then mages and future istic technology put in random spots. Also semi-well known heros of medival ages who slew dragons and so on. All these refferences to confuze and open the players mind, this will contribute to the emotions on the plot twists and drama on the story line.

I'm serious guys....I'm trying to know what really attract a reader and what not...

THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH ANY KIND OR STYLE OF GAMING!

As a writer myself, I don't think I can state my opinion without using it later for myself buuuuut..........

.........I don't know, I've frankly been trying to think of a plot for a story for over 4 weeks, I got one hell of a writers block. >_<

Well now I am serious about helping you, as a consumer of course, it is your choice to follow my advice or not.

There is one word that is the most important when it comes to story-telling, detail. Without that, the reader will no know the slightest as to what is going on.

Of course characters with depth, be it emotional or history is entirely up to you.

oh do the somewhat darkly twisted (in my opinion) romance one...

Honestly i find both stories equally cliche. :D