Undearneath The Seas Of The Golden Moons new track

still getting better, but your build up didn't do shit. You build it, then leave it. If you build it, you must tear it back down.

The song as a whole is a great improvement. Just fix the build up.

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Originally Posted by Rebuzzal

still getting better, but your build up didn't do shit. You build it, then leave it. If you build it, you must tear it back down.

The song as a whole is a great improvement. Just fix the build up.

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Originally Posted by Rebuzzal

still getting better, but your build up didn't do shit. You build it, then leave it. If you build it, you must tear it back down.

The song as a whole is a great improvement. Just fix the build up.

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i dont understand? what do you mean tear it back down? please explain so i can work on that

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Originally Posted by duby

i dont understand? what do you mean tear it back down? please explain so i can work on that

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i don't know if this is what rebuzzal was talking about, but yr song looks like this

http://i.imgur.com/KWhgnOw.png

you know how yr building it up with the bass drum getting faster and faster in the beginning? but then you don't do anything after that. it just drops. that sounds bad. if you build up, you have to stay up for a while. get some loud banging drums, add more bass, get more music underneath yr main melody.

try making a song that, when visualized, looks something like this

http://i.imgur.com/buzFnsL.png

that's way more satisfying to listen to.

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Originally Posted by TheSkald

i don't know if this is what rebuzzal was talking about, but yr song looks like this

http://i.imgur.com/KWhgnOw.png

you know how yr building it up with the bass drum getting faster and faster in the beginning? but then you don't do anything after that. it just drops. that sounds bad. if you build up, you have to stay up for a while. get some loud banging drums, add more bass, get more music underneath yr main melody.

try making a song that, when visualized, looks something like this

http://i.imgur.com/buzFnsL.png

that's way more satisfying to listen to.

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i thank i understand. so with the melody or bassline have some extra sounds with it. on the kick drums add more bass? and once i do the drum kicks in the faster form go with it? when i work on my next track ill work more on the melody and the bass of the kicks. and try adding more depth to them

thanks guys a ton

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https://soundcloud.com/thewhisperingtree-1/the-sounds-of-the-whispering-spirts

is this something better?

and this was my first track i worked on once i started again on music making

https://soundcloud.com/thewhisperingtree-1/thehands

is either of them good? if so ill go with that style and focus on that till i get it down

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Originally Posted by duby

i thank i understand. so with the melody or bassline have some extra sounds with it. on the kick drums add more bass? and once i do the drum kicks in the faster form go with it? when i work on my next track ill work more on the melody and the bass of the kicks. and try adding more depth to them

thanks guys a ton

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I know you don't like it, Duby, but go listen to some Dubstep. What they're referring to is, in dubstep terms, the drop. You built up the melody but the climax was subpar/anti-climatic. What you want is to build up the climax and, right at the peak, turn it on it's head. Add heavy drums, add flare, add something that makes it interesting. You need a mountain but created a hill.

I like the synth(?) on the track. It's very nice.

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Originally Posted by Phanein

I know you don't like it, Duby, but go listen to some Dubstep. What they're referring to is, in dubstep terms, the drop. You built up the melody but the climax was subpar/anti-climatic. What you want is to build up the climax and, right at the peak, turn it on it's head. Add heavy drums, add flare, add something that makes it interesting. You need a mountain but created a hill.

I like the synth(?) on the track. It's very nice.

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okay ill go listen to some in a while.

listening to country right now. but will view some dubstep to get an idea

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okay starting with the dubstep

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TeTAZvxWWJ0


seems there is a lot of genres of dubstep out there. gonna listen to a few to get an idea