http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...ntendocopy.png
It clearly needs corrections, so be brutally honest in your C/C.
v2
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...tendocopy2.png
Printable View
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...ntendocopy.png
It clearly needs corrections, so be brutally honest in your C/C.
v2
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...tendocopy2.png
the perspective of some of the charecters kill the realism, and the shawdows are too much also killing the realism.