[Poem] Silently Waiting

I see you staring at me,
but you never truly see,
why I love you, so much,
when you're so out of touch.
It seems so hard to let you go,
and the process is so slow.
I don't know whether I should stay,
and waste another day away.
You don't feel me loving you,
and you just can't seem to get a clue.
I know I really can't deny,
things I feel as I look you in the eye.
How come every time I see your face,
for me there's never any space?
Maybe someday you'll see me differently,
so until then, I'll be waiting silently.

i didn't read al of it but its nice

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Xynh

I see you staring at me,
but you never truly see,
why I love you, so much,
when you're so out of touch.
It seems so hard to let you go,
and the process is so slow.
I don't know whether I should stay,
and waste another day away.
You don't feel me loving you,
and you just can't seem to get a clue.
I know I really can't deny,
things I feel as I look you in the eye.
How come every time I see your face,
for me there's never any space?
Maybe someday you'll see me differently,
so until then, I'll be waiting silently.

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Did you write this about someone? (Not a joke)

Quote:

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I see you staring at me,
but you never truly see,
why I love you, so much,
when you're so out of touch.
It seems so hard to let you go,
and the process is so slow.
I don't know whether I should stay,
and waste another day away.
You don't feel me loving you,
and you just can't seem to get a clue.
I know I really can't deny,
things I feel as I look you in the eye.
How come every time I see your face,
for me there's never any space?
Maybe someday you'll see me differently,
so until then, I'll be waiting silently.

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As a poet and an avid reader I have to say that I enjoyed it. Even tough it's a rather common type of poetry. It's well written and it has feeling to it.
Go Xynh <3