My first sig on the forums

Well hello folks! This is my first time posting a signature/tag on this forum.

C&C/Rate Please

v1
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/8...amicopyhf7.png

v2
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1...iv2copypi4.png

Cool concept.
I'm getting sick of people using that render
The text is bleh. Try blending it, rather than having it stick out like a sore thumb.
It's undercontrasted. Try using a contrast layer, a curves layer, or a black and white gradient map on luminosity
Although I like that you put in a light source, it's too strong.

Still, cool sig. Keep it up :)

Looks good but you should weaken the light...overall good though. Text looks kind of weird but I suck when it comes to text effects :P