Rap Thread RECREATION

Apparently, some immaturity entered the door of that thread so it ended up closed. Let's not make the same mistake with this one.....I'm really trying to get something done considering I leave in 2 days.


Anywayz, my lyrics from my last post still stand:

Apparent disfunction...~You all are~,
The way I functionally dismantle.....~All bars~,
~I'm sick like SARS~,

~I'll make you cover your mouth~,
~Handle ya doubt~,
I'll spill ya blood, ~Personally handle ya shouts~,

Ya'll can't rap, ~Go leave the thread~,
Go walk ya pets, before I....~Walk instead~,
Don't make me ~Break bread~,

~Cuz when I break bread, it's over~,
There's no turnin' back, cuz when you turn back, ~I hit you with 4 Leaf Clovers~, (guns)...



Remember, let's keep it organized; it was Me and Jak vs. TommyD and Kult - If another set of people want to add themselves as a team, do so in an orderly manner.


~Rizzle.

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Originally Posted by soointolin

aiitz im in

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Find yourself a partner, lil man.

Nice Kyn, so now goes Tommy?

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Originally Posted by Kultfire

Nice Kyn, so now goes Tommy?

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U can go, Kult.

Talk about corny, -corn field workers can spit more worthy-
You talk about disfunction when your raps -need to be put under construction-

Chump change -that's all you are-
I think you need to rearrange -your battle scars-
You're not worthy of the Kult-mans time
-Do you need to edit that second line?-

You and asian boy need to get down with the tubes
-it's not about winning or losing, it's about kickin' ass and pwning noobs-

Slained once again, friend
-Go find some whiskey and a place to mend-

~yea, i got a green elephent in my sig but u've never seen mean talent that's this big.~

~u could never stand a day in my shoes,these tattoos don't say "i spit fire",for nuttin. i desire to be the best and that's what i am so,just bow down to my entire, empire.~

~don't dis my technique,yea,my grandmamma pinch my cheek but i'm still a hardcore gangsta,u can never beat. you better recognize, to me ur always smaller and i'm the full-size champ. ~

~yea, i'm asian and william hung is my idol but, i'm among those who are your rap idol. so,it's all over and done, i'ma put on my apron that say "you just got pwned by a 14yr old"~

Omfg..omfg..omfg!!

READ THE RULES.

You're not in it...damn man..

;p i just wanted to make a statement(it's a free country,freedom of speech,freedom of press,freedom of assembly,freedom of religion,freedom to pardon the government for greivences,and blah blah)

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Originally Posted by Kultfire

Talk about corny, -corn field workers can spit more worthy-
You talk about disfunction when your raps -need to be put under construction-

Chump change -that's all you are-
I think you need to rearrange -your battle scars-
You're not worthy of the Kult-mans time
-Do you need to edit that second line?-

You and asian boy need to get down with the tubes
-it's not about winning or losing, it's about kickin' ass and pwning noobs-

Slained once again, friend
-Go find some whiskey and a place to mend-

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Kult needs to find some time, to fix those rhymes,
Or he can shutup and be quiet like a mime,
He says go rearrange and fix your battle scars,
Don't even talk like that when u dont got no bars,
You betta go click that little edit button besides your bad post,
Why are u trying to run this thread, when ur not even the freakin host,
GO eat some toast, or even fly to the west coast,
look ur coughing up blood man, ewwww thats gross.

sweet my turn.. ^_^!

walking on the nitty gritty side of system of lies, - you need to pack your bags and walk the lines of suicide-
Lets take away the disfunctional part of this rap - and throw in some new brand-
your asian friend got played out - he must of thought the black man could take the stand-
But its okay though even if my ryhmes are abit sloppy
-Whats one little asian gunna do when the whole asian population cant stop me-
This is sour the sweetness turned bitter when you stepped in
-Kyns ryhmed choked the croud like it was his SAR's desease what effected em-
But wait though, its not over til the fat woman sings
-Jak lead your racist mom out by laying down a line of chicken wings-
This is a recreation of a boucned back rapper with a stolen car
-his black ass got sent to navy for complaining he had SAR's-
Dont bend down there soldier you might get yeah ass whipped
-A whole fleet of people on a ship can get your ass shipped-
But **** it, this has became my round
-Try edit your words, stop using your lines from a childs book from the 'lost and found'-

ded that was pretty nice but itll be alot better if your try shorten them
btw if anyone wants a 1 on 1 get at me ,or 2vs 1, doesnt matter outcome still the same ;] j.p

Till Kyn's leave.:(