My only suggestion is dont start off with " After playing crysis so on so on " should start with something like " I'm gonna review crysis today one of the best looking fps etc etc " you get me.
really nice feature , you could have showed the "ice age" to make people see how Crysis graphically can go atleast a show peek of his high detailled GFX there but overall great review
over all not bad, but there are a two issues i've seen:
One: the intro was a bit too long, but passible.
Two: the reviewer sounded bored out of his skull.
but looking passed thoughs its was pretty good.
if you guys need any text based reviews written based on older games, toss me a pm.