Nice attention to detail. Kinda have no idea whats going on though. What are those lights coming from? What exactly is she doing? And what are u trying to show.
Her arm in the foreground and the background are amazing, such great work with rendering them, but that means you need to render the face much more than you did. Also, have some of that bounced light from those glowey wire thingys. Shows that its really there, bounce the color on her clothes and skin.