Don't know if this has been done here lately, but I used to do this a while ago. This is a short story I had to write for Creative Writing, and I think it's actually some of my best work. The first half is the good part, the second half is utter shit because I was rushed and on a page limit. Please critique it, grammar, idea; anything you want. Also, I'm taking suggestions on how to lengthen or continue it because I was looking to write a follow-up story.

[QUOTE]
A Moral War
By Sam Stone

Jace arched his back and stretched with a wide yawn. He was tired after his long journey to the Mantal Forest. The surprising thing was that it looked less like a forest and more like a wasteland. Most of the