Please no negative comments.
If people don't like it, people don't like it. You have to be open to negative comments, yes, negative can be constructive too.

I'm reading Chapter 1 now, it seems bland so far.

“No, no…it’s not that. I decided it’s time to tell you something,” finished Kaye turning around to catch Vaughn’s brown eyes.“No, no…it’s not that. I decided it’s time to tell you something,” finished Kaye turning around to catch Vaughn’s brown eyes.

The clouds became an unmistakable dark gray, drips of rain started to clatter on the street, and murmurs of thunder were heard in the distance.

Vaughn was tired and coming home from school after a long day of testing to see his mother ready to give a long speech was a great discomfort.

Kaye, on the other hand, was not tired today. She had a day off her job as an accountant, which was a rare opportunity. After fifteen years of hiding it from him, she decided it was time to confess to Vaughn.
LOLWAT? Can't we have a buildup to this moment instead of it just being forced down our necks? You should let us know the character as the story progresses, not all in one chapter.