I liked it alot, really. Im guessing Vaughn is the hero, his mother is the herold, the old men are the mentors? I cant wait for into the abyss part of the story. I want more! lol keep it up. Also add some more big words. And like the other poster said, make it more suspense full when he finds out hes a sorcerer. Like have the mom beat around the bush and give him hints, so he finds out for him self. Idk some suggestions.
