Thanks a lot. As for the big words, It get's more deep and complex more into the story...Chapter 4 has an unfortunate event that occurs that will change your mind (but in a good way) about your theory of his mother being the herold. I will be nice and post Chapter 2 and 3 which have been completed (but not edited by my helper yet). It's been dusted off from a few weeks of laying there unscathed, so you guys will be the first one to exhibit the adventures in those Chapters. Once again, thanks for the comments, it will really help me in the coming arrangements and changes. Those are probably the best Chapters as well as the interesting and plot-revolting parts of the story, so as to keep you wondering.
And Xkarinx, your suggestion of Kaye "beat around the bush and give him hints, so he finds out for himself," is actually a really great idea. I've re-written Ch 1 only 2 times, and I knew (and felt) that wasn't enough. The other chapters were re-written many more times than that, so that indicates that I really need to bulge into more detail with Ch 1 before advancing off to a new course. As I edit them, things tend to change
