Chapter two as good. I think the hero should take alot more cation about the cat. He gave him his blood pretty fast, even when he knows that his dead father wanted some for the same reason. He should maybe flash back to his dream and make him possibly think a little more about giving him his blood. The cat possibly a shadow, maybe shapeshifter? Yes shapeshifter indead, he does shift shapes of course. I think hes ganna be both maybe. lol sorry about all these archetypes, I just got done with this unit in English and when I read books I like to find this out lol. Chapter three was awesome! I still can't find what the heros problem is. Maybe I will find it in later chapters.
