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    Default first decent sig (IMO)

    comments? any criticism will help just no "omgomgo sucks dick lololol"


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    Let's see, a few nitty gritty things.

    I kind of don't like the little spider web looking thing in the top right corner. Is there any way you can remove that and keep the green behind it? Or, make it thinner and flatten it into the background a little more, rather than have it sticking out?

    I also feel like the cape is a little too red compared to the rest of the image as a whole, but that is ignorable.

    Everything else, I like. Good job!

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    I haven't seen any of your others sig so I wouldn't know if it's an improvement D: For a beginner it's a nice sig. I suggest using tutorials and staying away from the fractuals, use c4ds , and try to find a nice flow.

    If you need any tutorials, I can link you to some good beginner ones or something. Anyways good job.

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    Its fairly decent, just some things I would like to point out(Take it as criticism):

    1)Color, the darkish dull green doesn't go well with the white. And trying to add fractals to dull colors is a bad thing. Go for something that is dark but could catch someone's eye!

    2)The text, because green is your main base color, have you tried text that looks edgy and sharp? Oh and you might want it bigger!

    3)Your render. The RF shiny blue highlighted armor does match well with green. And I can see that you added gradient? Makes it look rough =(

    Try to make sigs as simple as possible but still making it look smooth and complicated!(I know, WTF right?) Its very good for your first try, but you still need some patches here and there. Color coordination is very important because some colors do not go so well with others. I would rate it a 3.5/5

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    In general, it's not a bad sig.
    You got a good thing going that is. But like the color's a little dark and I can't tell what that thing on the bottom is.
    You could make it stand out a bit more
    I don't really like that greenish color in general. xD
    But the sig itself is pretty well made.

    @Xyphler
    That's a little large xD

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    nother one i made with serix's help


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    Quote Originally Posted by Xente View Post
    nother one i made with serix's help

    more like i slapped on the render then went back to cutting effin spa notes for an hour.

    send me your psd.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Serix View Post
    more like i slapped on the render then went back to cutting effin spa notes for an hour.

    send me your psd.
    no i did that one from scratch =D

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    Quote Originally Posted by Xente View Post
    comments? any criticism will help just no "omgomgo sucks dick lololol"

    Its very...
    Bland.
    Nothing stands out. I'd make the background darker, the text brighter or have some sort of outline, and the guy non-transparent.

    But thats just me.

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    my versionn babe.

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