Good people of OnRPG, I've decided to go into the flash "business". The reason for this post is I want to get some ideas and gather some critiques.

So, the story starts off with a hippie cow named Oist (heh, heh, heh) who's stash is stolen by aliens. This forces Oist to pursue the aliens in his VW Bus that has been converted into a spaceship that is fueled by rainbows.

This is just the base of the story. Obviously, it will progress as it goes along but I'd like some ideas, kudos, or critiques on the main story.