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    Red face Share your poetry

    Why can't you see that we're all involved
    in this world of contention and of biblical malls?

    Why can't you hear our animal cries,
    for fictional murders, while your mothers all die?

    This is the plea, the crying of millions.
    Instincts all caged by our sinful attire.

    Listen and feel behind your scan-lines.
    When I plug in this lyric, backed by the silence
    Into your outlet of total compliance
    The electrical brilliance surges from souls
    Towards the contrasting deafness of quite empty shells
    And shatters go the window, decibels abound
    A trillion papers and a billion fists
    This collision will repeat until it is found.
    Wrote this one last night. Anyone care to share any themselves?

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    I would.

    If I was creative enough to come up with anything

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    The eyes of hate stares down at me
    with so much disapproval and it makes me
    feel uncomfortable and unwelcome,
    My only wish to learn more about different cultures

    I live in a nation where different cultures
    Are meant to embrace each other
    Where multiculturalism is a symbol of strength
    I've also realize I live in a family of mixed heritage

    We all have blood pumping through our veins
    Heart beating and a brain
    And we all have feelings
    It's not worth judging someone through their race
    Fix it, if you must.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Urahara View Post
    Fix it, if you must.
    Whats wrong with it? oO

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    I just felt something is wrong or missing.

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    Sure c;.. here you are!

    A Fool’s Love Song

    I love you no matter how far away.
    He said with most pride and dedication.
    She replied to him: that’s what they all say,
    He packed his things and left on vacation.

    As the days went by she lost all her faith,
    For the return of her only true love.
    He promised to return by July the eighth,
    But ‘tis the ninth, and nothing thereof.

    Stronger she grows, more miserable it seems;
    Despite all her anger she’s still on her knees.
    Nothing is left but memories and dreams,
    Begging, sobbing─ somebody help me please.

    And that’s the story of someone so lost.
    She’s still waiting; her fingers are crossed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jammart View Post
    Sure c;.. here you are!

    A Fool’s Love Song

    I love you no matter how far away.
    He said with most pride and dedication.
    She replied to him: that’s what they all say,
    He packed his things and left on vacation.

    As the days went by she lost all her faith,
    For the return of her only true love.
    He promised to return by July the eighth,
    But ‘tis the ninth, and nothing thereof.

    Stronger she grows, more miserable it seems;
    Despite all her anger she’s still on her knees.
    Nothing is left but memories and dreams,
    Begging, sobbing─ somebody help me please.

    And that’s the story of someone so lost.
    She’s still waiting; her fingers are crossed.
    Damnit Jammy.
    :/

    Now I'm all b'aww

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    >.<; sorryyyy I have a lot of dark poems because I usually write them when I'm upset or just generally sad .

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    Quote Originally Posted by Deimos View Post
    Hugh Laurie and Rowan Atkinson, what's not to like about that?

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