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    Default Starting my own reviews // MMOs Notes | Need feedback

    on my website. http://www.asnzern.net/mmosnotes.html

    I just started, so not many are up there yet. I also am shaping up my writing styles.


    Now I'm hoping I could get some feedback from you guys ^^


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    BTW, this isn't aimed to be a Portal site, just my reviews.

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    Sorry as this is not about the reviews but you might want a newer layout.

    This one is a bit simple.

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    Yeah just posted about it on his Shout Box. I would add a proper page layout (Home Page, Reviews, etc) and make the layout a bit more interesting (including the background)

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    Quote Originally Posted by ASNZern View Post
    Added: Is black text over green background hard to read O o? Didn't realize that
    No..it's actually quite easy to read, that kid just has eye problems. It really isn't very attractive though.

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    Somehow that does look bad....... well, maybe not so bad, but it could be better, which I gonna try.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ASNZern View Post
    Somehow that does look bad....... well, maybe not so bad, but it could be better, which I gonna try.
    I'm no expert on computers but I think his is more pixel-lated than what it is for most people. That's either because it's a screenshot or because of his own computer. It actually looks much cleaner, although again I stress that it's still ugly, on my screen.

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    Jpeg = quite bad quality.

    Good is not enough when better is possible.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ASNZern View Post
    Good is not enough when better is possible.
    I like that quote...I'm going to use it in the future =]

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    Quote Originally Posted by ASNZern View Post
    You mean the table used as content area? Not sure I like it on the left.

    Paragraph yes. How could I not thinking of that.
    Well, it's not really the table that has to be moved, but the text should start on the left.

    Example:

    Paragraphs:
    http://www.onrpg.com/MMO/General/fea...MMO-Characters

    And here are some reviews you might want to take a loot at.

    http://www.onrpg.com/MMO/Deicide/review/Deicide-Review

    http://www.onrpg.com/MMO/PSO--Blue-B...ough-the-stars

    http://www.onrpg.com/MMO/Final-Fanta...nal-Fantasy-XI

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    Methinks the site doesn't look bad per say, not professional but simple and i like it simple.

    The reviews are about games i already have thoughts (and not very fond toughts at that) about, so i didnt really toroughly read them, but they seem okay, here i'm prompted to say again, not professional but simple.

    Well i got nothing more now, sorry I'm a bit tired, i just woke up.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ASNZern View Post
    Sry MageMoa, but I prefer the content to be in the middle. It makes the page symmetrical. Already added the paragraph though and align justify




    ...............I wonder if this breaks Rule No. 5 - No Self-Promotion
    It's your choice

    It doesn't break the rule. You are showing us your reviews and you are getting contructive critism. There is practically no personal gain involved.

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