Yet again, another one, well it isn't completetly finished, there's gotta be some things to change, and I wish for some feedback on it from onrpg..

Thanks for the C&C all the time onrpg.

Previous C&C was more feeling, and create the track to the vocals.
this is what I got.


Please listen to the whole track, and not just the first 50 seconds.

Well onrpg.

Did this improve since my last track?
yes/no, why?

If improved: what did I improve it, what's better?
If not: what's worse than my previous tracks? what to improve!

Thanks again guys! I really appriciate your help!