Any feedback on this ms paint art I did?

[mmoking]

Yesterday I was bored. PAINFULLY, PAINFULLY BORED. Anyways, I found myself drawing this picture or Dr. Horrible on Microsoft paint and I'm quite proud of how it turned out. Can anyone give me any feedback?

Keep in mind I do not have a tablet and this was done on Microsoft Paint so it looks rough in spots.

Be valid with your criticism. I'm not fishing for compliments so be honest with what I should change, but don't make comments about how much you hate the subject matter or some inane thing like that.

[Groteske]

Where is the picture? Are we playing Hide & Seek?

[mmoking]

Wow this is somewhat of a fail. I don't know how to post pictures to this thread from an ms paint file. I apologize for this.

[Eladon]

Upload it to imageshack.

[mmoking]

HERE WE GO! Sorry for the inconvenience

[Deimos]

need more practice yo

[Croix]

Did you look at a picture while doing this?

[mmoking]

Turn down the music on this, as he put in commentary on the war in Iraq






And, many more:

http://www.youtube.com/results?searc...+MS+Paint&aq=f

Thank you sir, for destroying my self esteem.

[Groteske]

Looks good but the black shadow part should of been a little less.....solid.

[mmoking]

Okay, no one likes the black bit it seems.

Regardless, here are some of my other work on paint from a while before. I'm still very open to criticism, keep in mind.


Serj Tankian of System of a Down. This is one of my very first attempts at paint. I know I put a lot of black.


This is one that I did of a very good friend of mine a while back. I actually think this might have been my first real attempt at making unassisted art on paint, which would explain it's mediocrity.


This is a more recent piece I did of Jesus Quintana from The Big Lebowski (Great movie by the way).

[lasthero]

pretty incredible for paint. i cant even draw a decent pic on paint, at best, a stick figure.