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    Default Another - Original?

    I tried to give this a whole japanese swordfighter look. Sepia'd a bit of it, gave it that antique feel.


    And yes, I know, I love the Papayrus font.





    Should I keep the japaneese chars or get rid of them. Or should I scrap this project altogether.


    And, I am trying to get better :P


    What should I add /edit?


    Rate? I dont care :P


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    I think you should make it look like the character is in the grass more, instead of just behind some wall of grass, and fix the fact that some of the blades of grass look like they're just kind of coming out of no where. Also, I don't think the color of the character really fits in too well, he's too monochromatic. I think you should keep the Japanese characters. I think it gives the whole signature balance...

    Then again, what do I know...

    P.S. I love the papyrus font too...

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    Uhhhhh one brush + Cut out Filter. I'd say the chinese characters are the best part of the sig... If they didn't look like they were playing four corners.
    The font the cool but it doesn't blend. Also the grass looks like its floating in some areas. Also the grass is like we todd did.

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    Updated... tell me what you think



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    Hmm the characters are a nice touch, good job with the grass, original once again but I'm not a big fan of the sig overall. The text is at a odd position and the layer that was cutout should have lower opacity to add more detail to the sig imo. Kind of awkward size too but it fits the sigs well.

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    This is just me, but i think that the person needs to be sharper.

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    Thanks folks, I'll take that into consideration for my next sig.

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