THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH ANY KIND OR STYLE OF GAMING!

It's actually a personnal project which i started a few years ago and I'm still doing it. However it never went far as my mind keep swapping over the details.

I'm currently, more or less, a writter which I considered. However, I'm not really armed with a Godly grammar but I do believe I have a big vocabulary in mind. Anyway, let's get back on what kind of opinion I need you guys' to help me on.

- I'm tired of always stuck with the 1st chapters of my story thus, I want you guys to give me an opinion on how I should start the story.

(The 1st choice)
1- Start it as the young hero will start with a quiet, peaceful and quiet romantic life with his childhood friend which is who he's been loving..then one day, chaos broke free from their chain and rampaged the village. The reason behind the chaos was that the long life friend and crush of his was actually one of the last bloodline of a humanoid angels. ( Story does not involve around God nor does it have any appearance within it) As the berseker destroyed the village, it took it's leave and the boy started to chase after her. Then the story flows around that as a beginning.

(The 2nd Choice)
2 -Dream of a chaotic scenes 10 years ago. Where the hero named as Tenh witnessed the destruction of his village in the hands of a long known person of his age which he pretty much hated. He luckily survived that chaos along with his friend Sakura. He was then saved by a person which lead them into Zero, biggest city and metropolis of the warring world. EVentually, they joined an elite force known as Genesis and since then, they've been hunting " Yumi" to avenge their village. However as the story flows, Tenh found out that his memory...aren't really the facts that happened. He's been brain washed....

Sorry for any typos and grammar. Sorry.

So which start should I take? I would be also pelased to know some great ideas to complet my stories. I'll gladly take them if it pleased me. Also, I'm aiming for a complicate plot where it targets a rather older readers and not for 10 years old kids. Okok? Thanks for the help! Love you guys. ( Imma girl writter...soo.....)