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    Default new track :)

    https://soundcloud.com/dubyhardcore/...nd-grave-hands

    bpm 205 spent a long hours last night working on it

    enjoy i hope

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    dafag.

    What's up with the nonstop BUM BUM BUM. It's like that all the way and then there are these few parts that it has something in it..
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    duby pls. It's like the same stuff every time. ( Tho it's not like i am listening to all of them )

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    Im getting better. it takes time to learn this. I practice everyday trying to learn it

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    Quote Originally Posted by duby View Post
    Im getting better. it takes time to learn this. I practice everyday trying to learn it
    But it looks like you practice the same stuff over and over.

    Same shit just different pile.

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    Quote Originally Posted by duby View Post
    Im getting better. it takes time to learn this. I practice everyday trying to learn it
    What? General consensus says otherwise.

    Ok, I'm going to give you some CC that I know for a fact you won't take into account (Because you never do)

    The bell thing or whatever it's supposed to be is not in sync for most of the song, which is absolutely VITAL - Seriously, if you can't even sync parts after doing this for so long, then I don't know what to say.
    The song has no flow. You need to seriously listen to the parts after you've created them, and look at how you're transitioning between parts - It isn't fluid at all.
    The bell thing (again) doesn't fit with the rest of it, most likely because the sound doesn't extend long enough. Lengthen the sound, and sync it, and it just might fit in a bit better (Even if the song would still be bad)

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    Quote Originally Posted by OooRangee View Post
    dafag.

    What's up with the nonstop BUM BUM BUM. It's like that all the way and then there are these few parts that it has something in it..
    ..

    duby pls. It's like the same stuff every time. ( Tho it's not like i am listening to all of them )
    It's called hardstyle ya scrub.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y06VPZ-vznA

    Hes just tryin to make darker versions of it.

    Shit was all out of beat Duby this time. Listen to what I linked and listen carefully. I know you're goin for the darker style but just listen to the beat, the rhythm, and how it flows.

    or this one since this is what your goin for
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dwdmfgZYe6Y

    before you try again, listen to hours of it. hours and hours. LISTEN. Don't just let it paly, but listen to the parts and how they fit together.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rebuzzal View Post
    It's called hardstyle ya scrub.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y06VPZ-vznA

    Hes just tryin to make darker versions of it.

    Shit was all out of beat Duby this time. Listen to what I linked and listen carefully. I know you're goin for the darker style but just listen to the beat, the rhythm, and how it flows.

    or this one since this is what your goin for
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dwdmfgZYe6Y

    before you try again, listen to hours of it. hours and hours. LISTEN. Don't just let it paly, but listen to the parts and how they fit together.
    thanks bro iv got that darkcore album in my bookmarks ill listeing to it again

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    Listen to these people, I said it in the last thread.

    Just listen and take their advice man.

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    Quote Originally Posted by duby View Post
    thanks bro iv got that darkcore album in my bookmarks ill listeing to it again
    nah, you didnt listen to it a first time. You heard the sound, but you didnt listen to the music. Listen to how the songs are put together. Listen to the flow, how the sounds are mashed together. Don't listen for enjoyment, listen for a learning experience.

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    Maybe include the lord in your music.

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    I would suggest starting off with the basic fundamentals of music because the beat is all over the place, which is really what stands out the most. I can't honestly say that I know much about this genre of music, but from what I have heard, it emphasizes heavily on the beats and uses some pretty simple patterns...which are kind of hard to mess up (and somehow you did). I can tell from the wave patterns alone before I listened that you have some unusual places where you decide to change up things. I know anybody who tried to count out the measures probably said, "wtf?" to themselves.

    Believe it or not, you can make some really good music just by starting off with a simple beat and a core melody. Focus on getting that down right first before you try to get fancy with it. And work on them separately before putting them together.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Oisterboy View Post
    Maybe include the lord in your music.
    this. so much this.

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