Silverice, imo you are much better than SmackHack at roleplaying, BS comes out of his mouth when he posted on your topic, "Dark Sayings"
The only rule you broke there was rule 20, don't worry about it. You arn't all that bad at rp, but I suggest you continue on your quest at rp'ing as you do, make your post length longer, fix your sentance structure and be more detailed and you're set to create a topic.
Where I learnt how to rp most of the time, (apart from Jadilus and slygger) was
www.rpgchat.com I suggest you go there, interact with a few people in the beginner's forum rp section and come back here, you'll be amazed and how badly you see people roleplay. You are in no way a 'noob' at rp, trust me, nor are you any good ( to say it bluntly )
All in all, check out that site, and don't listen to smackhack, he just wants to make himself feel high and mighty.