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Thread: My Spoken Word

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    The rap feeling reminds me of struggles you would work against (What I see in RnB songs that talk about the singers problems (Though I don't know why'd be unhappy with the income he's getting and all the fans)) while the poetry feeling reminds me of questioning if you can handle what's being thrown at you (Mostly found in any poetry written by the more depressed people in our society (Not saying any labels or genres, but you get my drift.))

    It's something I'd expect a famous singer to sing.

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    i don't like it. Verses seem too random, like your trying to make them rhyme.

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