Jakuza, a communion is a meeting with a god, deity, or supernatural power. I believe religions do this all the time to pray and stuff.
The word communion reminds me of the short story "Young Goodman Brown" which I read a few years ago. >_> Anyways, is this a poem as a prelude to the story or is the whole story going to be poetry? If this is how the whole storie's going to be, I agree with raiyne that it just sounds like you wrote a sentence and pressed the "enter" key every two words. Maybe if you say it in a spooky voice, it sounds cool, but then again, everything sounds cool in a spooky voice.
EDIT: Yes, it sounds like something under the genre: "Emo". I prefer happy stories. Ice cream cones and falling corn please. And candy.
