that's really simple, but it's really good. It's just like... I dunno, everyone else needs to overdo it to get their point across, but that was just how many words needed to make it good.
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that's really simple, but it's really good. It's just like... I dunno, everyone else needs to overdo it to get their point across, but that was just how many words needed to make it good.
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Oh, why don't people scream these things in my ear when I joined OnRPG... anyway... It's nice and short. Something I'd see in a Valentines Day Card at Hot Topic.Originally Posted by Saint
There is a Suggestions and Opinions forum for that. Please critique my poem or just don't post
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oh saint oh,is your girlfriend dumping you?anyway nice poetry lolz.and she hugged you for the last time b4 you say goodbye to her lolz?
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Unless i am wrong, but it is about some sort of relationship break-up. You would look like a real jackass giving that to someone on Valentine's Day.Oh, why don't people scream these things in my ear when I joined OnRPG... anyway... It's nice and short. Something I'd see in a Valentines Day Card at Hot Topic.
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Saint broke up with someone? Why don't people tell me these things before I make accidental rude comments to people... Uhm... Sorry Saint. Now I feel terrible.
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I could be wrong, but that is what it appears to be about.
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I didn't break up with anyone ^_^ Don't worry about it. I am switching schools and today was the last day I would be seeing this certain girl at school. Shes currently prohibited from contact with me out of school so that was probably the last time we will see eachother for a while. Thus, a poem.
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I did say "relationship break-up". It did not mean a romantic relationship.
Either way i win.
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Pretty short straightfoward poem. Could do with a bit of zest.
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