the background is very creative, but doesnt work well with that render.

begginners in my opinion need to start with the most simplistic "styles" and work up along the lines of novice and etc.

*you would want to start with vector designs to get your color chosing skills in check.

*also try grundge out for a while.
once you have mastered these styles try c4d's and manips and etc.

im a novice and i work well with vectors and sig like the ones below



so try it,
-Rai


im a novice