It looks alot better than the v1.
I REALLY don't like the whole crosshatcing effect on the render and some of the bg. Plus the text and that part of the render that was duplicated looks "in the way". The contrast on the render looks too high. For your first time with C4Ds, though, it's pretty good. But overall, gotta say I don't like this one took much. 6.5/10
damnit.
i hope i saved the psd