Not clean cut and everything, and it just kind of cut off at the end. And the URL is hard to read... It would probably be better if you had some characters in it in like 3D or something... And the people fighting or something... Not just going around the land and stuff...
why even bother making a game using PW -.- and true, you should have made some 3d characters in it. and the music was from FF? O.O you could have at least made your own music pfft
You know, this is his first game (correct me if I'm wrong) and so far he's done a great job with it. You can't just pick up C++ and learn it in five minutes, its a life-long thing.