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    Well, I seriously think that it was a bad idea to have used pink as the main background color cause' your render don't fit in with pink, secondly, I think your render is wayy too small, thirdly, your text is really bad, overally- 4/10

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    5/10. Looks like you spammed some splatter brushes. Also, the whole color scheme doesn't go well. The text also doesn't match in color or font and the render's too small. Not horrible for a first (or one of your firsts, right?), but could be better. www.gamerenders.com: Go to the forums and look for some tutorials. They'll help ALOT.

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    Wait, I listen to Pharell and I'm not sure why the background is Pink and Yellow... He skates, and he was in a band called NERD, and he has his icecream label. Wait, maybe the icecream is where you got the pink and yellow. Try going with some pale blues, yellows, and pale pinks next time. Also, flare in some white. That'd look better. =)

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