
Originally Posted by
availer
It looks alright at first glance, but there are many problems I shall address.
Firstly, it seems to me that the lighting is coming from below, I'm not exactly sure becuase the dark to light gradient is the other way. So im confused about the lightning which makes it seem a bit wierd. The buildings lack a bit of a cartoony characristic detail to them, they seem a bit tooo simple. The stroke for the huge circle in the middle is somewhat choppy. You should completely ditch the background you've started to make, it doesnt fit at all. Also, the little spheres you've seemed to try and imitate are too blury. Try putting a solid sphere with a glow instead of using an airbrush. The sun in the backround could do with less of that annoying tire texture.
/end critisizm.
High inter, 8/10.