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    Lol, just made it for fun. Started using that lil' Milo Game on his site where you make the little Baby Milo versions of him... then I took screenshots of all the ones I made and put them in a sig. It was really supposed to be for fun - I was bored - but I liked the outcome. Ratings/comments please.

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    how were the buildings in the background made

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    Quote Originally Posted by raikun09 View Post
    how were the buildings in the background made
    Rectangle tool, gradient, and stroke.

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    thx i'll that in mind.


    good work with this one

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    This shit is hot!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jakuza View Post
    This shit is hot!
    Glad you like it. Any more?

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    I love the colors. Those buildings and the sun are well made, good job.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BoundByHonor View Post
    I love the colors. Those buildings and the sun are well made, good job.
    Thanks a lot, bbh.

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    It looks alright at first glance, but there are many problems I shall address.


    Firstly, it seems to me that the lighting is coming from below, I'm not exactly sure becuase the dark to light gradient is the other way. So im confused about the lightning which makes it seem a bit wierd. The buildings lack a bit of a cartoony characristic detail to them, they seem a bit tooo simple. The stroke for the huge circle in the middle is somewhat choppy. You should completely ditch the background you've started to make, it doesnt fit at all. Also, the little spheres you've seemed to try and imitate are too blury. Try putting a solid sphere with a glow instead of using an airbrush. The sun in the backround could do with less of that annoying tire texture.

    /end critisizm.

    High inter, 8/10.

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    i love it..the buildings are well made and there are very nice renders in it!!it rocks!100 billion/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by availer View Post
    It looks alright at first glance, but there are many problems I shall address.


    Firstly, it seems to me that the lighting is coming from below, I'm not exactly sure becuase the dark to light gradient is the other way. So im confused about the lightning which makes it seem a bit wierd. The buildings lack a bit of a cartoony characristic detail to them, they seem a bit tooo simple. The stroke for the huge circle in the middle is somewhat choppy. You should completely ditch the background you've started to make, it doesnt fit at all. Also, the little spheres you've seemed to try and imitate are too blury. Try putting a solid sphere with a glow instead of using an airbrush. The sun in the backround could do with less of that annoying tire texture.

    /end critisizm.

    High inter, 8/10.
    Yay real criticism. ^^ Yes, the pattern on the sun is rather awkward. And I know the sun is choppy, just too lazy to fix and hope no one would notice. XP Guess I'll fix that. As for the background, what should I do? Just a solid color/gradient bg? And what should I do about the buildings to make them more "cartoony"?

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