Im not saying its bad, but you tried so much cool stuff, that its just too much of cool, you should get some coolness of so that we can actually see the render :P, the whole render is blurred and stuff
It looks like a big messy blob to be quite honest, while you can make out the render there is just to much goin on all over the place...sometimes less is better.
Unique perhaps. However, there's WAYY too much effects. I can't see anything. No master chief, no grunts... how do I know that it's Halo? XP And you neglected the right side of the sig, which looks empty. 5.5/10 Just too much, or it wasn't executed right. Either way, there's no sign of Halo anywhere in there.