[Astro Needs Help] Honest Opinion

[Astro]

So I need your honest opinion on this poem I've made for my loved one.
So please, only constructive criticism. If you feel like acting like an headless moron, hit the back button on your browser. Thank you.

Special One

My thoughts are made of paper and paint
And my feelings of iron and wood.
You'll never see my heart faint,
Because you are too perfect,
More beautiful than anyone should.

Simple things are what they are,
Complicated things are meant to be.
You're prettier than the most beautiful star,
And all I really need is you to love me.

Insistently a breeze runs around my head,
Warm and friendly it makes me shiver.
You're definitly the one they said,
The Special one that makes me quiver.

F.M.

[Negrac]

poetry cant be bad, but that could be far better. good none the less.

[Astro]

poetry cant be bad, but that could be far better. good none the less.

Thanks Negrac.

[Aru]

I think it's terrible, but...
I also think that poetry should stay in 1842, so...