Ballad writing.

[hksmrchan]

Onrpg, please help me
as I am in need for a poem
See, my English class is making me write a ballad.
I do not know any moments in my life that are valid.
I was going to write about the World.. of warcraft.

**** this.

I need an idea for a ballad, I was going to write one about shamans

"I am a shaman, lord of flames
I rise without shame
As the drums of war rings
Shamelessly, the horde
Sharpens their blood drenched swords

I am a shaman, lord of ice
It isn't very nice..."

Then my mind went :[

And then I was like.. "The whole class would think I'm a nerd."

I would turn this in, as it is better then nothing,
but I cant rhyme it any more.

Help me complete it please.

[Mr. First Name Basis]

Ballads tell stories, so i would suggest not describing yourself. Try this.

"Across the jungle,
across the plain
crossing the desert
I am: the lord of flame

Here comes your elf mohawk
I'm ready for a fight
you draw your mighty sword
I am: The lord of ice.

My weapon is now drawn
Get ready for plunder
Prepare yourself because
I am: Lord of Thunder

You attack first
A your great sword rammin'
I chop off your head
Because I am a shaman.

The Battle is over
I have cleary won
I take your head with me
To prove what I've done.

Ok I don't know much about World of Warcraft but this is what I've gathered from random things and what you have posted. (Is there a lord of thunder??)

[hksmrchan]

I decided not to turn anything in, I don't wanna look like a nerd, and I don't like getting personal.

Homework is weighted less then shit on my grading scale, it's going to take more then that to kill my ace.

I feel some guilt in it though..

[Solitude]

talk about girls wearin thongs. its a sellout

[kain222]

Ehrm.

Yeah, your freinds will think your a neeerrdeh.

[Bad Hamster]

Aren't ballads supposed to be like.... uhm emotional lyrics with slow mo music with a pure voice?

[Purple Coffing XD]

The darkness surrounds me
im all alone
i feel so sucluded
but people ring my phone
its like a neverending pain
surrounded by shame
of the pronunded title


goth was bored

skillz lol if you want music
and i know theres nothin' i can say but wheres your heart?, but wheres your heart? blah blah so many bright lights that cast a shadow lahalaha

[Ithian]

I was going to make up a ballad for you but Purple Coffing's siggy with batman and mcdonalds is too distracting xD Also you already decided to not turn it in, but just find something on your desk and write about it. Noone will think you're a nerd if you write about a pen or something :/ I usually write about nature because it's easy =]

[Deimos]

talk about girls wearin thongs. its a sellout

do a ballad about a guy who puts superglue on his hands and face then glues himself to the window of a womens gym so he can stare all day long at women wearing those thongs that go right up their cracks.

its a spiritual masterpiece.

:edit: or you could use this for inspiration lol (person who said goth made me think of this)

[Ithian]

Deimos I love you for finding that, that just made my day better