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Descolada: Departure
Those of you who know me well, know I once wrote a short story about these people who crash-landed on a desert planet.
Those of you who don't, go here to catch up:
http://jacksterson.deviantart.com/ar...ter-1-61981179
Well anyways. I wrote a preface to that chapter, I think I've gotten my second wave, and I may start writing again.
Which is a good thing, right? Writing is for smart peoples like me <3
Anywho, here is the preface
http://jacksterson.deviantart.com/ar...rture-83637884
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You really took the criticism you got from the other thread didn't you.
I liked it.
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What criticism? I forget what it said xD
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Hmm, isn't the Descolada from the Ender series?
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That is where I got the name from yes. From what I read, its Portugese for "Un-glue".
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I remember that thread... Pretty good improvement.
The main criticism I have is that it's kind of hard to figure out who Josh and Jack are, at least at first. You might try to make it a bit more obvious.
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